lunes, 20 de junio de 2011

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Question by Monica: Please comment and give opinions on my story?
"Girls' Bathroom"


Friday afternoon, Elisha stood in the bathroom mirror fixing her hair. She place a dab of lipgloss on her lips and swiped thick mascara more than her eyelashes. Next to her, Megan was texting Oliver Kessler on her blackberry.
"So me and Oliver are going to the films tonight and I was pondering if you and Mark would like to come?" she said. "Like a double date?"
"Sorry," Elisha apologized, "but we're going to

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